How about something funny?
This is very british humour:
Yes, I'll Marry You, by Pam Ayres
Yes, I'll marry you, my dear,
And here's the reason why;
So I can push you out of bed
When the baby starts to cry,
And if we hear a knocking
And it's creepy and it's late,
I hand you the torch you see,
And you investigate.
Yes I'll marry you, my dear,
You may not apprehend it,
But when the tumble-drier goes
It's you that has to mend it,
You have to face the neighbour
Should our labrador attack him,
And if a drunkard fondles me
It's you that has to whack him.
Yes, I'll marry you,
You're virile and you're lean,
My house is like a pigsty
You can help to keep it clean.
That sexy little dinner
Which you served by candlelight,
As I do chipolatas,
You can cook it every night!
It's you who has to work the drill
and put up curtain track,
And when I've got PMS it's you who gets the flak,
I do see great advantages,
But none of them for you,
And so before you see the light,
I do, I do, I do!
Or (for a close friend or relative to read) - you may want to change/remove the ending as it doesn't quite fit your criteria:
He always leaves the seat up
She leaves wet towels upon the floor
The toothpaste has no lid on
And he never shuts the door!
She’s not that clean and tidy
Though she may sometimes delude
Leave your things out at your peril
In a second they’ll have moved!
She’s a very active person
And she always wants to win
Where as he likes lazy days
She’ll still drag him to the gym!
He romances her and dines her
Home cooked dinners and the like
He even knows her favourite food
And cooks for her every night!
She’s thoughtful when he looks at her
A smile upon his face
Will he look that good in 50 years
When his dentures aren’t in place?!
He says he loves her figure
And her mental prowess too
But when gravity takes her over
Will she charm with her IQ?
She says she loves his kindness
And his patience is a must
And of course she thinks he’s handsome
Which in her eyes is a plus!
They’re both not wholly perfect
But who are we to judge
He can be pig headed
Where as she won’t even budge!
All that said and done
They love the time they spend together
And I hope as I’m sure you do
That this fine day will last forever.
And you’ll enjoy the drink and food!
He’ll be more than just her husband
He’ll also be her friend
And she’ll be more than just his wife
She’ll sometimes drive him round the bend.
This poem for xxxxxx and xxxx
A married couple now
Is a token of the love they share
And the thought behind each vow.
Just some of my favourite non-naff ones!!
Hannah