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Which wording for invites do you like???

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    Posted 12 February 2007 - 12:48 PM

    I have been researching various wording for our invites.... I really like to be different with wording, but i want it to "sound like us"! Don't think any of you know, but this is my second wedding and I also have 2 little girls (7 and 11)! So, I'm trying to add them into the invite as well. (they are very excited about the wedding) The function is very casual, and we are pretty whimsical and not formal.....
    Let me know what you think!!
    Thanks girls!!

    Leigh and Bryan are tying the knot!
    Along with Sydney and Skylar,
    Please join us for a wedding at sunset
    to become one!
    Oct. 7th
    Dreams Cancun , Mexico


    Some people touch us for a moment..
    and some for a season
    ....and some for a lifetime
    In each other, we have found the one
    with whom we will spend the rest of our lives
    loving, honoring, and cherishing
    Please join us in celebrating
    as we tie the knot on
    October 7, 2007 at sunset
    Dreams Cancun, Mexico
    Bryan, Leigh, Sydney and Skylar
    Leigh and Bryan
    October 7th, 2007

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    #2 anaderoux

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      Posted 12 February 2007 - 12:52 PM

      I love the 2nd.. I'd just remove the 'and' in the second line.. but sounds really nice

      #3 Nrvsbride

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        Posted 12 February 2007 - 12:57 PM

        I agree with Anny I like the second one. I would also reccomend removing the "and" from the second line. It sounds really pretty and I like that it is signed by the both of you and your daughters.


        #4 *JillD*

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          Posted 12 February 2007 - 02:11 PM

          I like them both, sorry! I think #2 sounds more formal if that's what you are going for, #1 more fun.

          I know I'm no help at all, see I'm even indecisive with other peoples weddings.

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            Posted 12 February 2007 - 02:14 PM

            I like #1 better, but I would take out the line "to become one" -- I dunno I guess I just like short and sweet, and it has your names at the top.

            #6 A10CalGal

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              Posted 12 February 2007 - 02:26 PM

              I like #1 based on how you prefaced your post.

              #7 JulieG

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                Posted 12 February 2007 - 11:44 PM

                I also like number 1 the best.

                #8 Christine

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                Posted 12 February 2007 - 11:49 PM

                hmm I don't know, I like #2.
                Christine + Will (married 7/20/07) + Ainsleigh (born 6/25/08) + Nolan (born 11/9/10) + Delaney (born 12/31/13) = One Very Happy Family!

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