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Wording for invitation for AHR - present list, let me know what you think!

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#1 AnnaReeves1

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    Posted 08 December 2007 - 06:49 AM

    So, I have written the below for the guests that are coming to Jamaica. We do not want to be preseumtious (sp?) in putting in a present list, but people keep asking us. We thought for eveyone who has come to Jamaica, we would put in the below. This is just to go in the AHR invitation. Obviously we will not put a present list in for anyone just comming to the AHR, as I think that it is a little rude put in a list almost 'expecting' a present

    Let me know what you think, honest opinions always welcome!!

    We are no good at writing poetry,
    So we hope you get the jist,
    Of this little rhyme,
    Why we have no present list.

    You are all travelling around the world,
    Conquring fears of flight and all
    Just to see us tie the knot,
    So thats all to wish for and more.

    If you feel the need to send a present,
    What we really wish for is a momento,
    Of the times we all had in Jamaica,
    So go ahead – send us a photo!

    In a frame, album, or on its own,
    The wedding, the beach, or of you
    Whatever the picture is
    Please let it bring a smile to us too

    #2 Sarah


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      Posted 08 December 2007 - 12:50 PM

      I think it's great!

      #3 Spazz

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        Posted 08 December 2007 - 07:47 PM

        I love it!

        #4 babycow

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          Posted 08 December 2007 - 08:01 PM

          Very creative! I like the idea of asking those attending your destination to share a picture of their time at your wedding. I don't think its presumptuous, if they are all asking. Its cute and fun way of clarifying.
          Erica and Tim
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          #5 StephanieMN

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            Posted 08 December 2007 - 08:06 PM

            Very nice! NO one should be put off by that cute little poem.

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