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#1 Jo 2010

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    Posted 17 November 2009 - 09:33 AM

    TA DA!!!

    My gorgeous talented friend has sent me the first draft of my monogram...

    I love love lova all the elements,but I think it could use some layout and placement work??

    Just looking for any suggestions...

    I just can't put my finger on it

    Thanks in advance for your help ladies - can't wait to hear your suggestions :)!!!!

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    #2 TheFutureMrs.Sears

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      Posted 17 November 2009 - 09:37 AM

      It looks great!

      OMG a Fiji wedding how exciting!! Oh and I love your poem!
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      #3 vlynnw

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        Posted 17 November 2009 - 11:00 AM

        that looks really great she did an amazing job, the only thing I notice is that the writing where your date is is somewhat difficult to see
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        #4 super19

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          Posted 17 November 2009 - 02:51 PM

          I agree, the writing is somewhat difficult to read. Beautiful first draft!

          #5 TheFutureMrs.Sears

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            Posted 17 November 2009 - 02:58 PM

            I would also agree that the writing is difficult to read. I just got so caught up in the fact that you are getting married in Fiji that I forgot to comment about the writing. lol
            http://global.thekno...rs/tt44496.aspx


            52 booked + The Bride and Groom!!!
            http://i69.photobuck....s/DSC02673.jpgMe and my Bridesmaids at my Bachelorette Party on a Roof Top with Manhattan in the background.

            #6 ~Melissa~

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            Posted 17 November 2009 - 03:05 PM

            very nice! well done!! only thing i would change is the size and font of the date text

            #7 autjo

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              Posted 17 November 2009 - 03:09 PM

              Great colors and first draft. You might consider playing up the 20-10-2010 date.

              #8 merocket59

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                Posted 17 November 2009 - 06:15 PM

                Wow that looks great, I agree with the others the only alteration that may make it look even better is playing around with the date it is a little hard to read and doesn't make the cool date jump out. Can't wait to see the final!

                #9 *Meagan*

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                  Posted 17 November 2009 - 06:21 PM

                  Very nice job! I agree with everyone else on writing and the font. Fiji so EXCITING!!!!

                  Also this may seem strange but is their a face in the flower on the right hand side of the flower? Its like the first thing I saw! Looks like a eye, nose, and mouth.. perfectly!

                  #10 hat0112

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                    Posted 17 November 2009 - 06:33 PM

                    Quote:
                    Originally Posted by future_mrs2010
                    Very nice job! I agree with everyone else on writing and the font. Fiji so EXCITING!!!!

                    Also this may seem strange but is their a face in the flower on the right hand side of the flower? Its like the first thing I saw! Looks like a eye, nose, and mouth.. perfectly!
                    I agree! I love the monogram but I first saw a face in the flower.

                    And I would change the text for the date. It is hard to read.
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