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AshleyRose's pink/orange boarding pass STDs - ROUGH DRAFT - Feedback?

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Hey Ladies,

 

I finished draft 1 of our boarding pass STDs. What do you think?

 

The black dot in the corner is for a hole punch... so you can ignore that wink.gif

 

I'm working on finalizing some stuff (ahem, actually booking the wedding) as well as one more "response" page ... but I'm not sure what I want the response page to look like yet. Feedback would be appreciated... especially on the letter. I didn't want to dwell on the fact that I know people aren't going to come -- but I also wanted to acknowledge what everyone knows that we know.

 

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-AshleyRose

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They look great! It's a lot of information for an STD, though, IMHO ... but I guess it's better to have too much info than too little. However, since you have a website, you may want to pair down the STD and direct them to the website for more of the nitty gritty details.

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They look so nice! Be careful with the pink azelea cardstock. That's what I used for my passport covers and nothing but black ink looked good on it.

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Thanks for the feedback. I was wondering if it was too much information... I have to balance the amount of information because he has a lot of missionary friends and family that don't have regular access to the internet -- so they will need as much as possible to make their choice... I just hope it doesn't overwhelm the other folks.

 

Thanks for the info on the metalic cardstock. We weren't really planning on printing anything on it -- maybe doing some heat embossing.

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Originally Posted by ashrose View Post
Feedback would be appreciated... especially on the letter. I didn't want to dwell on the fact that I know people aren't going to come -- but I also wanted to acknowledge what everyone knows that we know.
I think the letter sounds fine. Don't worry about dwelling on the fact that people can't come. It is good to let them know not to feel obligated.

You have a great start. Don't worry it took me almost a week and three pages of posts from the wonderful ladies on here to get mine looking the way I wanted. Carla :)

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