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#1 1elephant

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    Posted 09 October 2008 - 08:50 AM

    does anyone have a good invitation poem? i'm throwing dh a surprise 30th and can't think of/find anything witty enough to put on the invite!

    the only thing i have is absolutely terrible:

    k is turning thirty
    and that is no surprise
    please come help him celebrate
    and drink to his demise

    but it's not witty - it's mean!!!

    any help is appreciated!
    tia!

    #2 neen

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      Posted 09 October 2008 - 09:32 AM

      you could bastardize the words from Tim McGraw's "In My Next 30 Years"...

      #3 Christi

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        Posted 09 October 2008 - 11:01 AM

        I found these...

        There's a Birthday Party
        and you're invited to show
        But don't tell XXX, because he doesn't know
        So if you can make it, here's a word to the wise
        Make sure to come early
        'cause it's a Surprise

        We're having a party
        xxx hasn't a clue
        So keep it a secret
        we're counting on you!

        He’s another year older
        A new decade this year
        And we want to surprise him
        With all of you here
        The party’s a secret
        He doesn’t know yet
        And if you keep quiet
        A surprise he will get!

        #4 1elephant

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          Posted 09 October 2008 - 03:58 PM

          christi, i think that's perfect - thank you!!!!

          #5 Christi

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            Posted 09 October 2008 - 07:27 PM

            no prob...glad I could help! :)

            I had to edit this post...for some reason I thought you were throwing a surprise party for a friend, not your dh and I saw this one earlier and I think it's to cute for a spouse

            XXX told me,
            "No party, get me golf clubs instead!"
            But when have I ever listened
            to a thing that he’s said?
            So I decided to invite
            those we hold dear
            To help us celebrate
            HIS xxxYEAR!
            Since his birthday’s in xxx
            it should be a surprise
            if you keep it a secret,
            he will not surmise




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