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A poem I wrote

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#11 TATrisha


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Posted 17 April 2008 - 03:57 PM

That's really beautiful! How sweet is that?!? I think it'd be best if you read it to him at the reception. That way you can explain how you just knew it when you met. I think the story behind it really gives it extra special meaning.


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#12 jajajaja

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    Posted 17 April 2008 - 05:26 PM

    Since you have two- one from you and one from him, maybe frame them and sit them side by side at the guest book table or somewhere like that?

    Very cute- it's crazy you knew right away. It took Steve 6 months to convince me to go on a date with him.
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    #13 JennyK

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      Posted 17 April 2008 - 05:41 PM

      aww its a beautiful poem. I'd either incorporate it into your vows or during your reception, surprise him with reading the poem to him.

      #14 Kat81

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        Posted 17 April 2008 - 06:55 PM

        Okay so that night I gave him the poem he wrote this one at work and gave it to me the next morning. It slightly mimics what I wrote but sooo sweet

        Ive wondered the earth for such a long time
        Praying and hoping for someone to be mine
        I open my heart to those that I meet
        Truely believeing they are the right one for me
        But for reasons unknown, I cannot explain
        It always seems to end in heartache and pain
        'til along came an angel with green sparkly eyes
        full of love and kindness, she's a welcome surprise
        She has lifted my spirits and warmed up my heart
        It would be truely sad if we were ever to part
        So, Lord if you hear these words that I say
        All I ask of you is please don't take her away

        Sweet right? Only to be topped with.. about two months after this we were talking about how funny it was we both knew right away and how we wrote eachother poems to express how we felt because we were too scared to say it and he goes "yeah, when I was writing that poem, I couldn't think of anything that rymed with heart except fart" Well, at least he is sweet sometimes!! HA HA HA

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