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#11 TammyB

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    Posted 08 February 2007 - 01:26 PM

    OK I over analyze everything.. :-) So if I do "We" instead of Cain and I, would that be too many "we" because the next sentence starts with "We" as well.

    #12 Christine

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    Posted 08 February 2007 - 01:34 PM

    Tammy I think that if you put Tamm and Cain or we it sounds better because even though most people know the bride plans the wedding it would be bad if it was you who wrote the entire thing...does that even make sense?
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    #13 mexico15

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      Posted 08 February 2007 - 01:46 PM

      I like it too...I am going to steal the middle portion about family and friends joining as one! :) I like how that sounds! Great job! You made my job a little simpler! hehe!

      #14 LCBride2007

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        Posted 08 February 2007 - 02:58 PM

        Quote:
        Originally Posted by TAMMYM
        OK I over analyze everything.. :-) So if I do "We" instead of Cain and I, would that be too many "we" because the next sentence starts with "We" as well.
        I do too. But I don't think it sounds bad w/the 2 "we" sentences, but you could switch it up like "Both of us ... ," or "The two of us" or something like that.

        #15 TammyB

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          Posted 08 February 2007 - 03:17 PM

          Oh even better Ann, thanks..

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          Posted 08 February 2007 - 05:11 PM

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          #17 weez

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            Posted 08 February 2007 - 07:49 PM

            I think it sounds great Tammy, the couple of word tweaks that Ann suggested will be perfect. It couldn't come at a better time too, I am wrestling with my welcome letter as we speak so am going to steal some of your thank you lines too! Thanks!

            #18 amyh

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              Posted 08 February 2007 - 11:01 PM

              I agree with Ann. Change "Cain and I" to "We". Otherwise it sounds great!




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