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#1 MissBubbles205

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    Posted 20 July 2012 - 07:46 AM

    Good Morning Ladies,

     

    A terrible thing happened to me Tuesday.. My external hard drive that I was keeping all my wedding projects on, decided to stop working :'-( I cannot access any of the files, and believe me I am truly devistated.

     

    Luckily I sent the file for my passport invites to my mom to print a sample before it crashed.. But I lost everything else.

     

    Here is the new RSVP postcard I created.. I saved the file as an image so the background is off.. But I'm taking any and all suggestions to make these look better. :o)

     

     
     

     

     

     

     

     



    #2 MissBubbles205

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      Posted 20 July 2012 - 08:21 AM

       



      #3 ChocoTaco7568

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        Posted 20 July 2012 - 08:24 AM

        Oh no Britney, I'm sorry. I know how hard you've been working on all of this stuff. But I remember your previous RSVP card, and I like this design better

         

        A few notes, it could be my eyes, but double check that the font size in the 'NO' response line is the same size  for the 'YES' response, it looks a size larger to me.

         

        when you do a test print, make sure the last line regarding the website rsvp option is actually readable, it looks a bit small and maybe if you take out a word or two you may have enough space to increase the font point size:

        You can also RSVP via our website: www.weddingwire.com/AlexandBritney or

        You can also RSVP via our wedding website: weddingwire.com/AlexandBritney

         

        Are you still using the orange and pink paisley? Have you tried a design option to incorporate that in the perforated sections? If you are still using the paisley, it may be a nice touch to add consistancy/coordination with the passport invites.

         

        Let me know what you think.



        #4 jlb392

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          Posted 20 July 2012 - 08:46 AM

          I really like the RSVP.  I do agree with ChocoTaco, though, about the last line.  It looks like it's going to be a little tough to read.  Also, are you leaving the "staple here" on it?  will there be multiple pages?



          #5 MissBubbles205

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            Posted 20 July 2012 - 08:58 AM

            Originally Posted by ChocoTaco7568 

            Oh no Britney, I'm sorry. I know how hard you've been working on all of this stuff. But I remember your previous RSVP card, and I like this design better

             

            A few notes, it could be my eyes, but double check that the font size in the 'NO' response line is the same size  for the 'YES' response, it looks a size larger to me.

             

            when you do a test print, make sure the last line regarding the website rsvp option is actually readable, it looks a bit small and maybe if you take out a word or two you may have enough space to increase the font point size:

            You can also RSVP via our website: www.weddingwire.com/AlexandBritney or

            You can also RSVP via our wedding website: weddingwire.com/AlexandBritney

             

            Are you still using the orange and pink paisley? Have you tried a design option to incorporate that in the perforated sections? If you are still using the paisley, it may be a nice touch to add consistancy/coordination with the passport invites.

             

            Let me know what you think.

             Thanks Tova!!  I always appreciate your help and good eyes!! :o)

            WOW, my fonts were .5 off! I don't see how you caught that! lol.. I think I didn't have room before but I moved everything over so it would fit with the same sizes. :o)

            For the online RSVP, I took your advice and took out "wedding" and "at" and uped the font size, much better now! :o)

             

             Yes, I love the paisley, let me try to incorporate that!! Thank you soo soo much!!

             

            I'll post an updated pic. :o)



            #6 MissBubbles205

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              Posted 20 July 2012 - 09:48 AM

              Originally Posted by jlb392 

              I really like the RSVP.  I do agree with ChocoTaco, though, about the last line.  It looks like it's going to be a little tough to read.  Also, are you leaving the "staple here" on it?  will there be multiple pages?

               Yes, I was planning to leave it since all of the samples I ordered had it.. Would it look better if I removed it?  And maybe moved the flowers to its place?  No multiple pages.. My invites will be passport booklets.



              #7 MissBubbles205

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                Posted 20 July 2012 - 09:52 AM

                 

                 Okay... How about this one?



                #8 MissBubbles205

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                  Posted 20 July 2012 - 10:02 AM



                  #9 ChocoTaco7568

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                    Posted 20 July 2012 - 10:09 AM

                    Ooohh, I like it. You've become so crafty! Definitely forgo the staple.



                    #10 MissBubbles205

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                      Posted 20 July 2012 - 10:11 AM

                      Originally Posted by ChocoTaco7568 

                      Ooohh, I like it. You've become so crafty! Definitely forgo the staple.

                       Only thanks to you helping and designing my passports!! lol.. :o)

                       

                      forgo?.. Forget? Or keep?






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