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#1 merrylee

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    Posted 30 January 2011 - 09:36 AM

    Hi All,

     

    I am working on designing my save the dates, and I am not too fond of the the traditional wording so I made up my own and I was hoping to get your feed back.

     

    It is a BP invitation so the date and everything is on the side

     

     

    The Sun Will Be Shining; and the Waves Will Be Crashingas

     Meredith & Tom

    become Husband and Wife and begin their new life

     

    So Save The Date for a Wedding Celebration; in beautiful

    Cancun Mexico the PerfectWedding Destination

     

    Formal invitation to follow

     



    #2 sharlie

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      Posted 30 January 2011 - 07:05 PM

      sounds really cute just add "will" before "become" very creative


      Negril, Jamaica
      6/29/11
      24 booked =)
      Can't wait til the big day!

      #3 merrylee

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        Posted 30 January 2011 - 07:27 PM

        thanks so much Sharlie, i needed someone else to read it besides FI and I

         






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