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#1 Brandy

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    Posted 22 July 2010 - 01:48 PM

    Since all of you ladies have such fantastic opinions and are honest...I need help picking the wording for our boarding pass invitations...I cant seem to pick one that I like, let me know what you think.
    Option One:
    Walking on the beach together
    Hand in hand we'll be forever
    Bride
    &
    Groom
    Invite you to share in the joy
    when they exchange marriage vows
    and begin their new life together.

    Option Two:
    Walking on the beach together
    Hand in hand we'll be forever
    Bride
    &
    Groom
    Invite you to share the sun,
    the sea and the sand
    as they become husband and wife.

    Option Three:
    As unique as a seashell
    as deep as the sea
    As eternal as the waves
    our love is meant to be
    It is with joy that we,
    Bride
    &
    Groom
    invite you to share
    in our happiness


    #2 *Karla*

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      Posted 22 July 2010 - 03:23 PM

      Are you actually going to say "bride and groom," or are you going to use your names?

      Also, is the DW put on by you or your parents? If it's your parents, I think it's okay to say "they," but if the invites are coming from you, I would say "join us as we."

      I like the first one, if you used actual names, and use "we" and "our" instead of "they" and "their." Does that make sense?

      #3 Brandy

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        Posted 22 July 2010 - 03:54 PM

        Yes Im putting our names in there, and yes that was another option I was considering "togther with their parents" I just didnt want to list too many options lol

        #4 soontobemrsdow

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          Posted 22 July 2010 - 04:15 PM

          I like the third one best

          #5 *Karla*

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            Posted 22 July 2010 - 04:54 PM

            Well, I hope you get some more opinions, 'cause right now it's tied up, LOL!

            #6 miss_delerium

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              Posted 22 July 2010 - 05:15 PM

              I like #2 the best, but I agree with Karla about the "we" and "our" instead of "they". Otherwise it reads kinda funny.




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