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#1 binzer

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    Posted 27 January 2009 - 08:14 PM

    Hi guys,

    Someone in the family is making my invitations, and I think we're going to do the whole "message in a bottle" thing since we're only sending out 14 invitations and I don't need to worry too much about shipping costs.

    My main insecurity is how to properly word things. For my wedding, we are staying at a small boutique hotel, and the manager isn't going to let anyone else stay at the hotel while we are there (we take up almost every room). The only hang-up is that I want people to pay for their rooms by the rsvp date, because otherwise my dad's credit card will get dinged for it all.

    I have talked to most my guests, and I don't think any of them will have a problem paying for the rooms that early, so my only concern is that I don't make the invitations sound rude. I'm going to paste in the text that I'm thinking of for the invitations, so please let me know what you think (and if there's anything I need to add). I didn't included price details but instead referred to the wedding website, which I think is the best route? I've changed the names and dates for the sake of privacy.

    Main invitation:

    Jack and Jill Smith

    would like you to join them to celebrate
    the marriage of their daughter

    Lyndsey Cathryn
    to
    William Tyson Jones

    Tuesday, 22nd May 2009
    at
    Wedding Hotel
    City, Costa Rica

    Dinner and Dancing to Follow



    (Rsvp info)

    RSVP by
    1st March 2009
    at
    www.weddingsite.com
    or call
    (555) 555-5178



    (Additional Info Insert)

    Additional Information

    Hotel

    The Rancho Pacifico Hotel (www.hotelsite.com) has been reserved for the dates of May 20th to May 25th.
    Please call 1-800-555-5555 before the RSVP date of March 1st, and mention the Smith/Jones wedding to receive the discounted rate.

    For the nights of May 19th and May 26th, you my book at the San Jose Airport Holiday Inn for a discounted rate by mentioning the Smith/Jones wedding.
    This hotel is located right at the SJO airport and can be reached at 1-877-211-3289.

    Additional information, including costs and ammenities, may be found at our website (www.weddingwebsite.com)

    Contact

    If you have any questions, please call Tyson and Lyndsey at 555-555-5555, or email them at ouremail@gmail.com.
    Please also go to www.weddingwebsite.com for more information.




    Any advice appreciated! Thanks!!




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