"will you be my..."

[meghan1177 0]

I'm struggling with coming up with the right wording to ask the groomsmen to be part of our wedding. We've purchased white picture frames that have starfish up one side which we are planning to use to ask them -- but the workding seems contrived. I'm hoping you all might be able to provide some feedback -- any suggestions to make it seem less stiff?

 

(I'm posting a picture, but have no idea how this actually works, so fingers crossed that it shows up!)

 

[becks 72]

I really like them. The only thing I might suggest is personalizing each one with their names. Like "Bob, We would be honored..."

 

And I love the photo!

[nikkianddean 0]

those are really nice. I agree with Rebecca that personalizing them would be awesome.

 

Great job!!!

[meghan1177 0]

Thanks, guys -- that's a great idea. Thanks for the input.

 

The picture is one I took there a couple of years ago and we used it to make postcards on Vistaprint as well.