Feedback on Boarding Pass Invitations!

[nicholettemtz]

Hi!!! These are my first draft of our Boarding Pass Invitations.  Any feedback and opinions would be greatly appreciated! Be completely honest with me please, I want to make any changes that will make these look better!

We are planning to print these on a light cream or so color cardstock that is a little thicker.  Then we are going to put the passes in a purple sleeve and then in either a white or colored envelope. 

Oh and the RSVP is going to be a postcard so we will have the stamp and our address on the back and they will just have to remove along the perforated age and drop in the mail.

Any suggestions are appreciated!! Thank you )

 

 

[mzthan6]

they look great. no need to change anything. i'm sure they would look even better if printed on color cardstock. what font did you use?
 

Originally Posted by nicholettemtz 

Hi!!! These are my first draft of our Boarding Pass Invitations.  Any feedback and opinions would be greatly appreciated! Be completely honest with me please, I want to make any changes that will make these look better!

We are planning to print these on a light cream or so color cardstock that is a little thicker.  Then we are going to put the passes in a purple sleeve and then in either a white or colored envelope. 

Oh and the RSVP is going to be a postcard so we will have the stamp and our address on the back and they will just have to remove along the perforated age and drop in the mail.

Any suggestions are appreciated!! Thank you )

 

 

 

[ntlsnow]

Yes, what font did you use? I really like it! They look great, I really do not see an issue with them. I love the starfish date.

[nicholettemtz]

Thanks ladies! I used Edwardian Script ITC and Georgia and then online I found one called Italiano. So I kind of put a mixture of all of those into the invites.

[abs824]

They look awesome

[marooon13]

Great job!

[principessa]

I wouldn't change anything - they look great

[inloveinkorea]

nice job! The only thing I don't like is the way the "&" looks with that font. I had the same issue when I used that font on my invites. I chose a different font for the "&" so it wasn't so swirly and distracting. I wanted the focus to be on the names, not the "&"! 

 

But that's just me! Great job!

[ktucc1]

I think these look amazing!  My fiancé and I are planning on getting married in Aruba next year and I really love the boarding pass invites.  How did you make those?  They look so professional!  Any feedback would be GREATLY appreciated.  I have been looking all over online for help in creating them myself

[finleya]

First let me say that these look AMAZING! A lot of people try to go overboard with graphics and such and these look simple and classy.

 

That being said, maybe a little more color on the second and third pages? Since you have the darker purple and teal colors, it wouldn't look tacky to have some of the text in that color. Maybe just the headings in color?