I'm also considering a very simple postcard instead
friendly reminder on one side
and dont forget to RSVP with a reminder about the early booking bonus on the second side. I will just leave it at that....
plain and simple and then i wont insult anyone
Originally Posted by acireta
If they miss the early booking deadline, they miss out on cheaper rates. Their bad. Don't stress about that!
I think you should make it a little more casual or conversational. Its very formal (and very well written) which might come off a bit harsh.
Off the top of my head, I think taking out these lines would change the tone of the whole piece:
"If we do not receive your RSVP by March 28th we will assume that you do not plan on coming."
"Your response would be greatly appreciated"
Maybe change "Thank you for your consideration!" to "We hope you can join us for our celebration in Paradise!" or something like that.