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#1 shanng243

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    Posted 09 June 2010 - 03:04 PM

    Is this right? I'm not really sure about the punctuation and capitalization. Also, is the wording ok? If not, any suggestions to improve anything would be awesome!!! Also thinking of putting "Love makes life a paradise..." across the top of the invite. not sure though. Thanks!!!!!


    Shannon ........
    and
    Jason......

    Are pleased to announce they will be
    married in a private seaside ceremony
    Thursday, the twelfth of August 2010
    in Cabo San Lucas, Mexico.

    Together with their families,
    they invite you to join them for a
    wedding celebration when they return
    as husband and wife.

    Saturday, October 2, 2010
    Seven o'clock in the evening
    The Skyroom

    #2 mexico102

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      Posted 09 June 2010 - 03:38 PM

      sound great, looks good!
      Ps 10/2/10 is my wedding in Mexico
       

       


      #3 AishaB

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        Posted 09 June 2010 - 06:54 PM

        It looks perfect to me. I also have to say that I love the wording and just might "borrow" it for the AHR that I am maybe also planning! Great job.
        BDW the best place for my TYPE A personality!

        #4 JanineA

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          Posted 09 June 2010 - 07:17 PM

          I think it looks and sounds great! Though perhaps you may want to put venue, then date then time (The Skyroom, Saturday October 2, 2010, then time). Or you can leave as is.

          #5 jodieP

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            Posted 09 June 2010 - 08:15 PM

            Looks great, love your wording!

            Jodie.xx
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