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#11 YIweddings

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    Posted 01 June 2010 - 09:55 AM

    love the poem idea. We did one to and everyone loved it.
    Soon to be Mrs. Kramer

    #12 soontobemrsdow

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      Posted 01 June 2010 - 04:06 PM

      Thanks so much for the ideas ladies....i like what each of you did and will take all the ideas back to the drawing board and I think we'll switch it up a bit in places then I'll post again with what we're going with!

      #13 natalie1987

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        Posted 07 June 2010 - 09:18 PM

        very nice!!

        #14 mdb

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          Posted 07 June 2010 - 09:39 PM

          The time has finally come,
          I said yes and we’ll become one.
          It won’t be June or in July,
          But January, we will fly
          You won’t need boots or a hat,
          But, it will be hot, I promise you that.
          Go ahead and take a guess…
          It’s Jamaica mon… with no stress
          January is the date to wait,
          So don’t forget to save the date.


          Add your name and the official dates

          Here is an idea.. I hope it helps... : )

          #15 Miss Lighting Bug

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            Posted 09 June 2010 - 04:02 PM

            Thanks for starting this going. I actually and going to steal this idea if you don't mind- LOVE LOVE LOVE IT
            KB

            #16 soontobemrsdow

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              Posted 08 July 2010 - 05:35 PM

              Hi Ladies, I figure I'll post with what we ended up going with...if a part of it is from you thank you sooo much! Also a big thanks to everyone else too though!

              He proposed she said yes!
              Where we're getting married though you'll never guess.
              It wont be in summer but the cold month of January.
              Don't be alarmed outside wont be snowy & scary.
              It's gonne be really hot we can promise you that.
              You won't need a parka, boots or a hat.
              Do you think you know? Do you have a clue?
              We're going to Jamaica mon! We hope you can too!
              We're getting married January 11, so you've got a bit of a wait!
              We're going to have an amazing time so be sure to save the date!

              Looking back I guess I never even changed it up too much LOL....but where I did I think it sounds way better.

              And of course MissLightingBug you can steal my ideas...I'm sure I've borrwed enough from other people on this site that it's my turn to give back! lol

              #17 *tinkertoy*

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                Posted 10 July 2010 - 08:56 PM

                So cute!!!

                #18 Ms.H

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                  Posted 11 July 2010 - 10:28 PM

                  Love the poem! We did a really simple, kinda cheesy one....

                  He asked the question
                  The answer was yes,
                  [U]insert name here[U] is going to wear
                  a wedding dress.

                  We're off to the beach
                  to get it done,
                  come to Mexico
                  and join in the fun.

                  Definitely cheesy, but great for our homemade save the dates :)

                  #19 soontobemrsdow

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                    Posted 15 July 2010 - 06:09 PM

                    Quote:
                    Originally Posted by Ms.H
                    Love the poem! We did a really simple, kinda cheesy one....

                    He asked the question
                    The answer was yes,
                    [U]insert name here[U] is going to wear
                    a wedding dress.

                    We're off to the beach
                    to get it done,
                    come to Mexico
                    and join in the fun.

                    Definitely cheesy, but great for our homemade save the dates :)

                    no way I love it! Homemade stuff like that is what saves you lots of $$$ in the longrun and people can see you put your personality into it.




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