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#1 surprise4us

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    Posted 19 April 2010 - 09:40 PM

    Hi Girls

    Well I ahve looked through all sorts of threads for this but I am having a hard time reading some of them.
    I am trying to put together the wording for my boarding pass STD, which is slowly turning into my invitation as my date creeps closer and I still don' t have them out.
    My question is, as i send these out i need people to put down their deposits, how do I stress the time limit for them to do this on the invite? How did you word this? Also how do I tell them to book with our agent to get this price?
    thanks any other advice or wording you used would be grearly appreciated.

    Thanks

    #2 Kate_CPWInvites

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      Posted 19 April 2010 - 10:39 PM

      You can just come right out and say it so they get the idea. Usually it is something like this ...

      We have arranged a special rate for all of our guests through (travel business name). Deposits must be received by (date) and can be made by calling (travel agent name) at (phone number/email).

      #3 Teira1031

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        Posted 23 August 2010 - 11:38 AM

        I agree with Kate_CPWInvites , straight forward but in a polite way !



        #4 Islandgirl910

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          Posted 10 November 2010 - 08:30 PM



          I like this. Think I may use it for ours.

          Originally Posted by Kate_CPWInvites 

          You can just come right out and say it so they get the idea. Usually it is something like this ...

          We have arranged a special rate for all of our guests through (travel business name). Deposits must be received by (date) and can be made by calling (travel agent name) at (phone number/email).







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