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#1 RAENJAY

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Posted 25 May 2007 - 04:20 PM

I've been working for 2 days now on getting this timeline right.... Can somebody proof it for me? Spelling, spacing, straight, etc??

All help appreciated.

And of course, if you need a timeline you are more than welcome to borrow my idea (which I got from Sarah)...
Stephanie & Jason ~ RIU Palace ~ Cabo San Lucas
June 23, 2007
Visit our wedding slideshow Stephanie & Jason
Photography by Jose "Pepe" Lima

#2 Sarah

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    Posted 25 May 2007 - 04:34 PM

    Looks great Stephanie! I just have a couple comments:

    1. Do you want everything capitalized or not? I'd make all the "to the" "at the" etc not capitalized, and all the other words capitalized- does that make sense? For instance, I'd do "Guests Arrive at the Beach" and "Mingle at the Cocktail Hour" and "Say Goodnight to the Newlyweds", and so on...

    2. Do you want the date on there? I'd maybe put it right under your names.

    Great job!

    #3 Rachelle E.

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      Posted 25 May 2007 - 04:39 PM

      I think it's cute and informative! I like it!!

      #4 RAENJAY

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      Posted 25 May 2007 - 04:58 PM

      Quote:
      Originally Posted by AQHARIDER
      Looks great Stephanie! I just have a couple comments:

      1. Do you want everything capitalized or not? I'd make all the "to the" "at the" etc not capitalized, and all the other words capitalized- does that make sense? For instance, I'd do "Guests Arrive at the Beach" and "Mingle at the Cocktail Hour" and "Say Goodnight to the Newlyweds", and so on...

      2. Do you want the date on there? I'd maybe put it right under your names.

      Great job!

      Thanks! That's why I needed somebody else to look at it. My eyes were going crossed.
      Stephanie & Jason ~ RIU Palace ~ Cabo San Lucas
      June 23, 2007
      Visit our wedding slideshow Stephanie & Jason
      Photography by Jose "Pepe" Lima

      #5 Sarah

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        Posted 25 May 2007 - 05:05 PM

        No problem! But, even if you don't change those things I still think it looks great- I like your clip art better than mine too!

        #6 NHPT

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          Posted 25 May 2007 - 05:43 PM

          looks good to me- good job!
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          #7 Martha

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            Posted 25 May 2007 - 08:09 PM

            It looks good! However, the "C" in cocktail is not capitalized...I think it should be.

            #8 amyh

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              Posted 25 May 2007 - 09:02 PM

              Thats really cute... everyone caught the only mistakes I noticed (capitals).

              #9 LadyP

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                Posted 25 May 2007 - 09:08 PM

                NICE WORK now breathe

                #10 SusanK

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                  Posted 26 May 2007 - 09:43 AM

                  Very cute! I'm definitely filing that in my computer's "wedding" folder... for later use
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