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#11 TATrisha

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Posted 22 May 2007 - 10:56 AM

Yup Tammy, I like the revised version.

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#12 *JillD*

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    Posted 22 May 2007 - 09:05 PM

    Love the revised version!

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      Posted 22 May 2007 - 09:14 PM

      I did not vote yet cause I was going to say I liked 1 and 3 together, and then I read on and saw that you added them together. So, I vote for the new one, lets call it #4

      #14 CourtneyV

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        Posted 22 May 2007 - 09:40 PM

        I love the first one and the newest one... but I liked the one you did before a few weeks ago where it had a bit of laughs in it too. You're a naturally comedic person, and I loved that part of your vows - but I love the new ones too, they're genuine and sincere. ...can you write my vows for me next year?!
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        #15 dragonfly

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          Posted 22 May 2007 - 10:51 PM

          Tammy~
          I think #2 is very poetic. I am a writer and most of the best written lines of all times are short and simple (and beautiful).

          I think these lines will have a greater impact on those around you. People (and men) have a short attention span. LOL

          Seriously, I feel that you poetically out did yourself with #2!
          Kelly~

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            Posted 22 May 2007 - 11:02 PM

            I like #2. Simple and PERFECT!!

            #17 dragonfly

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              Posted 22 May 2007 - 11:12 PM

              Tammy~
              I think #2 is very poetic. I am a writer and most of the best written lines of all times are short and simple (and beautiful).

              I think these lines will have a greater impact on those around you. People (and men) have a short attention span. LOL

              Seriously, I feel that you poetically out did yourself with #2!

              Kelly~

              Sorry I posted twice by accident. How do I delete this?

              #18 Sarah

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                Posted 23 May 2007 - 08:05 AM

                I love #2, and voted before reading any comments...after going back and reading I do like your revised one too, but I still love the simplicity of #2. It has a traditional vibe to it, which I'm drawn to, but yet is personal. I don't know- as untraditional as a DW is, I like the traditional vows and #2 reminds me of the traditional vows, but 100 times better- does that make sense? Sorry I'm rambling, been up all night- time to go to sleep!

                #19 TammyB

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                  Posted 23 May 2007 - 08:22 AM

                  Girls now I'm really confused. I was going to go with the revised one, but now I don't know.. God why do I have to over think EVERYTHING

                  BTW, Kelly I can't take credit for #2, I borrowed it and tweaked it a little. :-)

                  #20 PaulaV

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                    Posted 23 May 2007 - 12:13 PM

                    I voted for #3.
                    You really shouldn't make me cry at work you know....




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