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#11 Mishi

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Posted 12 January 2009 - 03:45 PM

I love stuff like this and that's such a cute idea... here's something I came up with...

This October, with our special guests, we will tie the Knot
This time of year the weather will be great and not so hot

Because you're dear to us, we would love for you to go
But understand if other plans simply cause a no

We are sure to have a blast, down in the Florida sun
We hope you'll share our special day and join in the fun

Just let us know, if you think, that you will make it there
These memories are sure to be exciting ones to share

For those of you that can't attend, after Michigan temperature rises
There will be a party back home and everyone's invited!

#12 BachataBride

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    Posted 12 January 2009 - 04:12 PM

    Great job Mishi!! I like it!! :)

    #13 kennynicole

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      Posted 13 January 2009 - 09:33 PM

      Ohhh......Mishi that is really good!

      #14 car1969

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        Posted 23 January 2009 - 01:02 AM

        What a great idea!!!

        #15 SgtPepperette

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          Posted 24 January 2009 - 10:29 PM

          Ok ladies, I think we have a winner. Let me know what you think :)

          Coming soon we are going to tie the knot.
          It will be in October when it's not so hot.

          We just wanted to let you know.
          About this place we would like you to go.

          Please come and join us in the Florida sun.
          For that is where the wedding shall be done

          Of course we would love for you to go
          But understand if other plans simply cause a no

          Just let us know if you will make it there.
          These memories are sure to be exciting ones to share.

          For those of you that will greatly be missed.
          There will be a party at home that you just can't resist.

          #16 KLC77

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            Posted 25 January 2009 - 02:56 AM

            Quote:
            Originally Posted by SgtPepperette
            Ok ladies, I think we have a winner. Let me know what you think :)

            Coming soon we are going to tie the knot.
            It will be in October when it's not so hot.

            We just wanted to let you know.
            About this place we would like you to go.

            Please come and join us in the Florida sun.
            For that is where the wedding shall be done

            Of course we would love for you to go
            But understand if other plans simply cause a no

            Just let us know if you will make it there.
            These memories are sure to be exciting ones to share.

            For those of you that will greatly be missed.
            There will be a party at home that you just can't resist.
            I think this turned out really well. I especially like the last verse.
            ~Kelly

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