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#1 becks

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Posted 26 June 2008 - 07:07 AM

Okay, so my creativity is... not so creative today.

We've purchased these great card key/tip money holders that have a ziplock-type seal on them so nothing falls out. We also have wrist coils for the girls and caribinier clips for the guys.

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But the wording is very meh. It currently reads:

"I take you to carry my key and tip money for wetter ro for drier, for soused or for sober, in heat and humidity until I depart."

Anyone have any ideas how to make it snappier? FI thinks it's cute but I'm not satisfied.

TIA!!

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#2 yamille

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    Posted 26 June 2008 - 09:41 AM

    I really like the wording actually. I think it's funny, wedding related and cute. I have been sitting here trying to come up with something else and am stuck. I'm sorry I couldn't be any help! I will post later if somehting inspiring strikes.

    #3 gettinghitched2010

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      Posted 21 April 2009 - 04:39 PM

      Where did you buy the key holders? I love them.

      #4 MsClarke724

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        Posted 08 October 2010 - 09:42 PM

        love them!



        #5 GreekFood

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          Posted 20 September 2011 - 05:56 PM

          I think that's adorable!


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          #6 charitydawn

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            Posted 21 September 2011 - 08:29 AM

            I like the wording its cute :)



            #7 MissBubbles205

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              Posted 21 March 2012 - 01:57 PM

              I agree, I think it's super cute.. I may have to borrow this. :o)



              #8 gomezherrera

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                Posted 23 March 2012 - 06:55 PM

                How creative are you..very nice.. It makes me wanna use it too now..lol

                Okay, so my creativity is... not so creative today.

                We've purchased these great card key/tip money holders that have a ziplock-type seal on them so nothing falls out. We also have wrist coils for the girls and caribinier clips for the guys.

                Click the image to open in full size.

                But the wording is very meh. It currently reads:

                "I take you to carry my key and tip money for wetter ro for drier, for soused or for sober, in heat and humidity until I depart."

                Anyone have any ideas how to make it snappier? FI thinks it's cute but I'm not satisfied.

                TIA!!



                #9 MissBubbles205

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                  Posted 24 March 2012 - 03:53 AM

                  Are yall putting 2 cards in these?... so when people put their money in them, it is not well seen?



                  #10 Smitten

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                    Posted 24 March 2012 - 06:09 AM

                    Miss Bubbles that is a great idea....I had not thought about putting in two cards, but it is simple enough to do.  :-)






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