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#11 rodent

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    Posted 15 May 2008 - 06:17 AM

    Thanks so much for the feedback. I can't upload draft #2 because it's on the computer in the room where my friend is asleep. But, I have made the changes.

    I made the text off center so it centers with the tree
    I made the tree lighter green.
    I put a thin black line around the peach date. It stands out better now.
    I put a green oak leaf between the location & town

    I'll move the name down too.

    Once I have the chance I'll post the current version. We are going shopping for her wedding dress & my BM dress all day today so it might take me a while.

    Thanks again! I'm so excited about them. It was fun for me to be able to contribute something to her wedding. As an out-of-state BM I won't be able to throw showers or anything like that.

    #12 Alyssa

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      Posted 15 May 2008 - 07:28 AM

      Morgan - i didn't read anyone else's comments.

      1st - i LOVE the tree - great image.

      2nd - i think the tree should be centered closer to the top and the the "STD" could be under it maybe a size larger.

      maybe it could say

      "Save the Date"
      for the wedding of

      Corei & Randy
      April 18th, 2009

      xxxxx location
      city, texas

      #13 rodent

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        Posted 15 May 2008 - 07:33 AM

        Quote:
        Originally Posted by Alyssa
        Morgan - i didn't read anyone else's comments.

        1st - i LOVE the tree - great image.

        2nd - i think the tree should be centered closer to the top and the the "STD" could be under it maybe a size larger.

        maybe it could say

        "Save the Date"
        for the wedding of

        Corei & Randy
        April 18th, 2009

        xxxxx location
        city, texas
        Great tips! I'll try those today.

        I am loving that oak tree. We went through many pages of google images until we found it. Then I cleaned up the picture & made it into a photoshop brush. It looks like an oak tree that was in my grandparents backyard. They built their house on that spot of land to be near the oak tree.

        #14 ACDCDCAC

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        Posted 15 May 2008 - 08:07 AM

        i love it, but agree with the changes you are making, one thing, it needs more peach somewhere! the only spot i see is the date. unless peach is her accent color, and green the main color.
        great job!

        #15 MsShelley

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          Posted 15 May 2008 - 08:20 AM

          it looks great, I can't wait to see the updates

          #16 Emily&Matt

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            Posted 15 May 2008 - 09:46 AM

            Could the "Save the Date" be the same color as "April 18, 2009"? I like the tree a lot.

            #17 Jenn3878

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              Posted 15 May 2008 - 09:54 AM

              Great job Morgan!! Can't wait to see the final :)

              #18 ACDCDCAC

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              Posted 15 May 2008 - 10:43 AM

              Quote:
              Originally Posted by Emily&Matt
              Could the "Save the Date" be the same color as "April 18, 2009"? I like the tree a lot.
              good idea!

              #19 meltanirie

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                Posted 15 May 2008 - 11:05 AM

                I agree the wed date should be darker and I would also center the date (between the name and the place). Other than that awesome job!

                #20 ErinB

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                  Posted 15 May 2008 - 04:43 PM

                  With some of the minor editing they will be perfect!

                  You are a great friend to be doing this even though you're far away. I can't even get my BMs in the same city to come to the wedding muchless help with anything else! LOL




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