What do you think of my friend's STD?

[rodent]

Thanks so much for the feedback. I can't upload draft #2 because it's on the computer in the room where my friend is asleep. But, I have made the changes.

 

I made the text off center so it centers with the tree

I made the tree lighter green.

I put a thin black line around the peach date. It stands out better now.

I put a green oak leaf between the location & town

 

I'll move the name down too.

 

Once I have the chance I'll post the current version. We are going shopping for her wedding dress & my BM dress all day today so it might take me a while.

 

Thanks again! I'm so excited about them. It was fun for me to be able to contribute something to her wedding. As an out-of-state BM I won't be able to throw showers or anything like that.

[Alyssa]

Morgan - i didn't read anyone else's comments.

 

1st - i LOVE the tree - great image.

 

2nd - i think the tree should be centered closer to the top and the the "STD" could be under it maybe a size larger.

 

maybe it could say

 

"Save the Date"

for the wedding of

 

Corei & Randy

April 18th, 2009

 

xxxxx location

city, texas

[rodent]

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Originally Posted by Alyssa Morgan - i didn't read anyone else's comments. 1st - i LOVE the tree - great image. 2nd - i think the tree should be centered closer to the top and the the "STD" could be under it maybe a size larger. maybe it could say "Save the Date" for the wedding of Corei & Randy April 18th, 2009 xxxxx location city, texas

Great tips! I'll try those today.

I am loving that oak tree. We went through many pages of google images until we found it. Then I cleaned up the picture & made it into a photoshop brush. It looks like an oak tree that was in my grandparents backyard. They built their house on that spot of land to be near the oak tree.

[ACDCDCAC]

i love it, but agree with the changes you are making, one thing, it needs more peach somewhere! the only spot i see is the date. unless peach is her accent color, and green the main color.

great job!

[MsShelley]

it looks great, I can't wait to see the updates

[Emily&Matt]

Could the "Save the Date" be the same color as "April 18, 2009"? I like the tree a lot.

[Jenn3878]

Great job Morgan!! Can't wait to see the final

[ACDCDCAC]

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Originally Posted by Emily&Matt Could the "Save the Date" be the same color as "April 18, 2009"? I like the tree a lot.

good idea!

[meltanirie]

I agree the wed date should be darker and I would also center the date (between the name and the place). Other than that awesome job!

[ErinB]

With some of the minor editing they will be perfect!

 

You are a great friend to be doing this even though you're far away. I can't even get my BMs in the same city to come to the wedding muchless help with anything else! LOL