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#1 JaimeLynne

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    Posted 02 May 2008 - 02:23 AM

    I am wrapping up the semester of French 1441 (beginner's French). For part of our final exam we have to write 2 paragraphs about a trip we recently took. It is supposed to be in "pass© compos©". Also we were encouraged to use transitional words (d'abord, ensuite...) as well as vocabulary from this chapter (mainly weather related).

    Please keep in mind this is a beginners class so it shouldn't look perfect but I would greatly appreciate if you would let me know of any obvious errors or if something "just doesn't look right". TIA!

    Here's my short little essay (no laughing! LOL):

    Le decembre derni¨re mon fianc© et moi sommes all©s   Puerto Vallarta, Mexico. Il a fait tr©s beau. Il a du soleil et le ciel ©t© blue. Mais, il fait tr©s chaud et loud avec temperatures entre 80 et 90 degr©s. La ville ©t© super! Il a des montagnes y la plage.

    D’abord avons mang©   un restaurant tr¨s magnifique – Le Kliff! Ensuit sommes rest©s   la plague tout l’apr¨s midi. Apr¨s avons dormis. Puis avons fait de la voile et sommes all©s a “Las Caletas” – une ®le tr©s magnifique! Malheureusement, en fin sommes retourn©s   Dallas.

    ~ Jaime & Martin ~
    "Rain or Swine! 2-0-0-9"

    We had 24 people attend our wedding in Las Caletas, Mexico on May 24th, 2009!

    We all stayed at The Marriott in P.V., and Honeymooned at The Royal Plantation in Ochos Rios, Jamaica!


    #2 JaimeLynne

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      Posted 02 May 2008 - 12:20 PM

      Thanks Royfa for the help - Mods, feel free to close this thread now if you'd like :)

      ~ Jaime & Martin ~
      "Rain or Swine! 2-0-0-9"

      We had 24 people attend our wedding in Las Caletas, Mexico on May 24th, 2009!

      We all stayed at The Marriott in P.V., and Honeymooned at The Royal Plantation in Ochos Rios, Jamaica!


      #3 Pisces

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        Posted 02 May 2008 - 09:33 PM

        I'm a French teacher and would be happy to help you if you ever need it. It sounds like you got some assistance with this already, but let me know if you would like more help:)
        Colin in I in 2005 when we fell in love with Maui!




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