Wording help please
Posted 03 March 2008 - 03:12 PM
From that, I wrote this....
We're getting married!
We're heading all the way to Mexico to say our vows and would love for all of our family and friends to join us. We realize that it may be difficult for everyone to travel that far so we will also have a reception in St. Louis upon our return. Since Cancun is so far away we understand if you cannot make the trip, but our fingers are crossed and we'll be delighted if you can!
My mom read it and thinks it's a little too wordy and now I kind of agree. How should I reword it?
Posted 03 March 2008 - 03:20 PM
Posted 03 March 2008 - 03:24 PM
We're Getting Married!
As we head down to Mexico to say our vows we would love for you to join us.
We realize that it may be a long trip for some, so we are having a reception in St. Louis upon our return.
Your names here are very excited and hope you will be able to make it to Cancun!
Posted 03 March 2008 - 03:28 PM
Posted 05 March 2008 - 12:46 PM
our vows will be on xx date at xx time at xx place (mexico)...
then i would do a separate card in the envelope with the invite stating that there will be an at-home reception upon your return.
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