which sounds better?

[KLS1982 0]

Saturday, the fifth day of July

Two thousand and eight

At sunset on the sands of Mexico

 

OR

 

Saturday, the fifth day of July

Two thousand and eight

On the sands of Mexico at sunset

[LadyP 2]

i like the first one

[amyh 3]

I like the first one.

[KLS1982 0]

Thanks for the quick response ladies, that was the original one so I'll stick with that!!!! y'all rock

[shellb 0]

First one.

[MsShelley 4]

I agree the first one sounds the best

[CourtneyV 1]

Another vote for the first one!

[Yari 1]

Same here, first one!

[twinkletoes 2]

I'm on the first one bandwagon as well,lol

[KarmaB 0]

My vote: 1st!