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#1 amyh

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    Posted 26 January 2008 - 05:41 AM

    Hi Ladies. I feel like I'm pretty much done w/ the design of my invites. I made the spanish version first and just completed the English version. I am pooped and can't think anymore.

    I would love any suggestions. FYI, I know the response cards look crammed and complicated, but I need to keep them this size and need my guests to provide all the info, since we are giving them meal options.

    TIA!!!

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    #2 amandalovesryan

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      Posted 26 January 2008 - 06:59 AM

      These are very nice! I think that they are perfect. No changes needed that I see!
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      #3 Christine

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      Posted 26 January 2008 - 10:30 AM

      Amy those are beautiful! Great job...my only suggestion is the place where you have your parents names is off center.
      Otherwise those are amazing! You did a fabulous job
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      #4 ACDCDCAC

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      Posted 26 January 2008 - 10:41 AM

      those are beautiful! the only thing I've got to say is that the script-y writing is a little hard for me to read, but it probably looks different in person. maybe if they were one point bigger??

      #5 Sarah

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        Posted 26 January 2008 - 10:49 AM

        Amy I think they are amazing! I agree with Christine- I'd maybe center the parents' names- other than that I wouldn't change a single thing....

        OK, you know I'm a font junkie. Will you share what fonts you used? I really love the script one your names are in- but would love to know which you used for everything if you're willing to spill the secret :)

        #6 becks

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        Posted 26 January 2008 - 11:46 AM

        I love them - I agree with Christine that your parents names look a bit off center.

        Also - LOVE!!!!! that you indicated the number of seats you had for them - no unexpected guests. Absoulutely BRILLIANT!!!

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        #7 Celina

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          Posted 26 January 2008 - 12:00 PM

          Great job! These look wonderful. I love the first line..."Because you have shared in the lives of our children..."

          Beautiful.
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          #8 MsShelley

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            Posted 26 January 2008 - 12:02 PM

            they look really good, you did a great job!

            #9 pryzeless

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              Posted 26 January 2008 - 12:06 PM

              The look great! I love the Spanish version.

              #10 rodent

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                Posted 26 January 2008 - 12:15 PM

                Great job! I was going to say the same thing about the parent's names, but the design queens beat me to it.

                I do think the font your location is in might be a little hard to read, but maybe if that line was just a little bigger it would be fine. It's such a cool font I probably wouldn't change it. Where you wrote "cocktail" it's not hard to read, so I think it just needs a little more size.

                Beautiful work!




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